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The Day After Valentine's

Its in the way you look at me Its different from everyone Its like you can finally see Even when blinded by the sun I try to remember all the things you did Like how you tickled my back Youre everything i dreamed of when i was a kid Like how you make up for the things i lack Now as i sit in bed Trying to figure out what you want to say Putting paper to lead Its probably on this thought that ill dwell all day Youre evolving from a want to a need Not to sound creepy at all Because these words come out like i bleed While we listen for parents in the hall I think the last time you left you took my heart Or atleast youre in the process of stealing it I cant even stand it when we are apart Im hoping youre also feeling it And hopefully im doing a better job than max bemis Because i know you like the way he can put things Maybe he could do better at describing this But i dont think even he could publish our feelings Im trying to get my thoughts around you But its at this job theyre stuggling Its about this struggle i dont know what to do Between thinking and breathing im juggling And i hope you grasp these lines I hope you eventually say what you wish to say And even though its after Valentines I wrote you a poem for today And i could go on for forever Telling of times we spent together Just know that the only one is you Andthe feeling still feels brand new i think this one is much better ;)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/18/2010 6:30:00 AM
GREAT WAY OF EXPRESSING YOUR SELF .TO SOMEONE YOU LOE SO MUCH..BEFORE AND AFTER VALENTINE...ENJOYED READING ...THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT...REPLYING BACK ..I THINK I WAS ALMOST RIGHT.....IRMA
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