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The Dawn Speeds Swift

The dawn speeds swift upon night's lovers Dark nooks surprised by harsh sunlight Soon startle to their morning manners The dawn speeds swift upon night's lovers Their sweetness, daybreak swallows not Last kisses linger, liquid, long together... The dawn speeds swift upon night's lovers Dark nooks surprised by harsh sunlight

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/15/2019 11:17:00 AM

Very well written my friend - Sunlight for some could be true and sad and for others happy and glad... Hugs Gershon, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:23:00 AM

Thank you for the perceptive observation, Jennifer. We do, indeed, interpret everything through the prism of our own unique lenses. Warm wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/15/2019 6:46:00 AM

Excellent! Very well written Gershon :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:22:00 AM

Thank you so much for your warm words, Heidi. :) gw

Charles Messina

Date: 6/14/2019 10:42:00 PM

Well Gershon, you do have some romanticism in your blood. Well done my friend. Awesome write! Charlie

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:21:00 AM

Ha, ha. Enjoyed your comment, Charlie. Yes, occasionally some of the 'bloody romanticism' bleeds right out on the screen here. Best wishes, Gershon

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2019 10:04:00 PM

Gershon, your lovely romantic poem has wiped away my anger today. I loved this beautiful peaceful poem. Thank you my friend! : ) xxoo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:20:00 AM

Can't imagine you angry, Connie. But if you were for a few moments, that I'm so glad to have helped allay that anger. Best wishes, Gershon

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/14/2019 9:42:00 PM

Oh, Gershon, your romantic side is as amazing as your insightful side, and then, there is your witty side of equal impressive value.. but beyond that, your endearing side trumps them all. A fantastic romantic poem, my wonderful friend, lovely in imagery, emotion and a sheer pleasure to read. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:20:00 AM

Thank you for sweeping me away with your warm words, my dear friend. Best always, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2019 9:33:00 PM

A sweet write, my friend. Well done Triolet! They are not easy.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind words about this triolet, Caren. All the best, Gershon