Gershon Wolf Poet Triolet

The Dawn Speeds Swift

The dawn speeds swift upon night's lovers
Dark nooks surprised by harsh sunlight
Soon startle to their morning manners
The dawn speeds swift upon night's lovers
Their sweetness, daybreak swallows not
Last kisses linger, liquid, long together...

The dawn speeds swift upon night's lovers
Dark nooks surprised by harsh sunlight

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Jennifer Proxenos June 15, 2019 at 11:17 AM Very well written my friend - Sunlight for some could be true and sad and for others happy and glad... Hugs Gershon, Jennifer. Gershon Wolf June 16, 2019 at 9:23 AM Thank you for the perceptive observation, Jennifer. We do, indeed, interpret everything through the prism of our own unique lenses. Warm wishes, Gershon

Heidi Sands June 15, 2019 at 6:46 AM Excellent! Very well written Gershon :) Gershon Wolf June 16, 2019 at 9:22 AM Thank you so much for your warm words, Heidi. :) gw

Charles Messina June 14, 2019 at 10:42 PM Well Gershon, you do have some romanticism in your blood. Well done my friend. Awesome write! Charlie Gershon Wolf June 16, 2019 at 9:21 AM Ha, ha. Enjoyed your comment, Charlie. Yes, occasionally some of the 'bloody romanticism' bleeds right out on the screen here. Best wishes, Gershon

Connie Marcum Wong June 14, 2019 at 10:04 PM Gershon, your lovely romantic poem has wiped away my anger today. I loved this beautiful peaceful poem. Thank you my friend! : ) xxoo Gershon Wolf June 16, 2019 at 9:20 AM Can't imagine you angry, Connie. But if you were for a few moments, that I'm so glad to have helped allay that anger. Best wishes, Gershon

Susan Ashley June 14, 2019 at 9:42 PM Oh, Gershon, your romantic side is as amazing as your insightful side, and then, there is your witty side of equal impressive value.. but beyond that, your endearing side trumps them all. A fantastic romantic poem, my wonderful friend, lovely in imagery, emotion and a sheer pleasure to read. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Gershon Wolf June 16, 2019 at 9:20 AM Thank you for sweeping me away with your warm words, my dear friend. Best always, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger June 14, 2019 at 9:33 PM A sweet write, my friend. Well done Triolet! They are not easy. Gershon Wolf June 16, 2019 at 9:19 AM Thank you so much for your kind words about this triolet, Caren. All the best, Gershon