Sotto Poet Poet Couplet

The Dawn

Written: April 06, 2024

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Behold the moon, an aesthetic gem in the night sky.
A golden tint of dawn was approaching nearby. 

They're inextricably linked, to my soul with grace.
Mother, moon, and I in the dawn embrace.

With the moon to my left and dawn to my right.
I greet my friend as morning takes flight. 

And as darkness strikes, I bid my mother farewell.
Our love endures through all ebbs and life swell.

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Duke Beaufort April 11, 2024 at 10:53 AM SP, a pleasure to read. As the day begins you focus on the things that are important to you. Not a bad way to think about each day.

Vijay Pandit April 7, 2024 at 5:02 AM So beautifully poetic, my friend: --Behold the moon, an aesthetic gem in the night sky. A golden tint of dawn was approaching nearby--excellent imagery you created through your gifted imagination.

Aysha Nuwas April 6, 2024 at 8:02 PM Very beautiful verse, Aysha

Anne-Lise Andresen April 6, 2024 at 1:03 PM - A beautiful picture with your words and feelings, Las :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick April 6, 2024 at 12:41 PM Ahh!! Nice one. I enjoyed reading it today. It is always fascinating to see the sun and moon both in the sky close together. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K