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The Darkness

like a heavy cloak darkness covers all the land nothing moves or breathes

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Date: 6/3/2025 10:36:00 PM
Indeed. The heavy cloak is the perfect netaphor
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Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 6/3/2025 10:37:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 6/3/2025 12:51:00 PM
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