The Darkness

like a heavy cloak darkness covers all the land nothing moves or breathes
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Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Indeed. The heavy cloak is the perfect netaphor
Mckeithan Avatar
June 3, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Thank you Andrea
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June 3, 2025 at 12:51 PM
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