The Darkness

The darkness has my soul
no light can be seen
no one can be found 
to help me out of the darkness
maybe one day
someone will come 
save me from the depths of darkness
my soul has slipt into
until then i will sit in the darkness
an wait for my white knight 
to come save me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 28, 2009 at 5:13 PM
I'm afraid the 'white knights' have gone the way of the unicorn. Plus, you will not attract anyone with so deep a depression. Trust me, I'm an expert. Prozac saved my life. Depression is an ILLNESS not a 'feeling.' If you were a diabetic you would take insulin. There are many fine drugs that can treat this ILLNESS. Get thee to thine medicine man! Good luck, God bless, may you have many bright tomorrows.******Danielle******
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