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The Darkest Day

Billows of Darkness
Surrounding a Broken Heart
Breathe deep smothered LOVE

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Laura Breidenthal

February 15, 2012 at 10:48 PM

This poem I can surely relate to. I enjoyed this one. Thanks. I hope everything is well. Always, Laura

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2010 at 6:22 PM

I know this day for you. Very sad.

Keith Bickerstaffe

April 2, 2009 at 8:47 AM

Superb 'b' alliteration... and the assonance of 'smothered love' is most effective. Great title! Best wishes, Keith

Chris Goombi

March 25, 2009 at 2:01 AM

Forlorn writing, I write with Raul, he's a friend of mine and he has told me of your work. Great stuff.

Faire Lucas

March 22, 2009 at 6:23 PM

very good....it Be-utiful....Love Faire

Belinda Parish

March 18, 2009 at 11:41 PM

Another great write HGarvey. You certainly have a way with words....

Raul Moreno

March 18, 2009 at 10:46 PM

Amazing work HG, nice flow and great senryu...Raul

Carolyn Devonshire

March 18, 2009 at 9:37 PM

HG, this is so beautiful! I am sending you a Soup Mail shortly.

March 17, 2009 at 11:32 AM

The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Nice use of alliteration. Keep on writing! Karen

Sharon Winter

March 17, 2009 at 5:56 AM

Wow, I do so feel this dark, dark write. You are such an amazing poet. Love, Shar

Arany P.

March 17, 2009 at 5:38 AM

thats a really good senryu... and love the last line... ~ Arany

James Marshall Goff

March 17, 2009 at 5:28 AM

takes my breath-away!!! really!!!!!!!! great wow! cool! Jim

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