The Dark Veil

I slipped into depression
I never thought I would
As I really liked to mingle
At every chance I could

But the beast it got me
When I was off my guard
Stopped me my life from living
That hit me very hard

The tears my cheeks would water
Without a single thought
To go to do my shopping
Would make my body  taut

My breathing started racing
And my heart to pump so fast
That I thought that I was dying
And the next breath would be my last

Then I started talking
Found out I was not alone
There are thousands of us out there
Afraid to leave our homes

So if you feel like I did
Please do not give up hope
There is a life after depression
And sharing will help you cope

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/23/2014 2:31:00 AM
Robert, thank you for the comment on my comment. PD
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Date: 5/22/2014 8:17:00 PM
Andy, just keep writing on. It's what you do.
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 5/23/2014 2:23:00 AM
morning Jerry how strange is that I was just thinking of you this morning. Thanks for popping by. will visit you soon for a browse. Your friend Andy
Date: 5/21/2014 7:54:00 PM
always nice to read your poems..LINDA
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Robert Andrew Lyle
Date: 5/23/2014 2:18:00 AM
thank you Linda for your kind words Andy
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