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The Dark Secret

There is so much to tell I can't describe it all but at least I can make clear The worst of all I have been through a lot my heart says end it all My soul says wait there is another dawn Again, I am standing alone Thinking about then and now Maybe I should let it go Or maybe I should run I am tired of every cruel word I am tired of feeling I don't want to feel anymore I want to lay down silent forever See through the two worlds My words will be left unheard my heart bleeds to this dream I am hushed by the hypocrites I don't have to say more maybe I should try more Or just let it go.. written by Alizeh (my real name)

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Date: 6/11/2017 2:32:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, remember never loose hope from life you don t know what God have think about you, He can change fortune in seconds, if you re so frustrated with your life start a new one it isn t very difficult,(just an opinion I hope you didn t mind) however I m also new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 6/9/2017 2:09:00 AM
It is good that we have words to write down our frustrations and our feelings, and that sometimes there are people out there that read and understand. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Alissa Violet
Date: 6/9/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Dude I really appreciate your support :))

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