The Dark Secret

There is so much to tell
I can't describe it all
but at least I can make clear
The worst of all
I have been through a lot
my heart says end it all
My soul says wait there is another dawn
Again, I am standing alone
Thinking about then and now
Maybe I should let it go
Or maybe I should run
I am tired of every cruel word
I am tired of feeling 
I don't want to feel anymore
I want to lay down silent forever
See through the two worlds
My words will be left unheard
my heart bleeds to this dream
I am hushed by the hypocrites 
I don't have to say more
maybe I should try more 
Or just let it go..
written by Alizeh (my real name)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/9/2024 8:43:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/11/2017 2:32:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, remember never loose hope from life you don t know what God have think about you, He can change fortune in seconds, if you re so frustrated with your life start a new one it isn t very difficult,(just an opinion I hope you didn t mind) however I m also new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 6/9/2017 2:09:00 AM
It is good that we have words to write down our frustrations and our feelings, and that sometimes there are people out there that read and understand. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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Date: 6/9/2017 9:22:00 AM
Thanks Dude I really appreciate your support :))
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