The Dark Horse Rides

mist in the distance
closer it wave's
A dark shadow catch's  my sight
As it flow's over graves
It stop's before me
Breathing out it's fear
creeping silently
on it's horse so near
Horror fills me
Dread and remorse
The dark rider stay's
still on his horse
suddenly i look 
Into his deep eye's
Fear and pain leave me
As he stifled my cries 
a minute past
My mind so still
Unbridled passion
Take's over my will
Faster he rides 
Through the mist of the night
Faster my heart beats
Emotion just right
I've fallen in love
with dark ghost of the dust
i'm gone in a second
To feed his lust
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Hill Avatar
October 11, 2013 at 12:22 PM
I enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work.....TAH
Moore Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 5:25 AM
Thank you Tobey ,glad you enjoyed Tina x
Mcdaid Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 4:04 PM
OH THE DARKHORSE IS RIGHT UP MY STREET BEAUTIFUL PIECE
Moore Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 4:10 PM
ha! thanks liam look forward to reading more of yours tina x
A   Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 1:36 PM
ha Tina, you're gonna love it here.. you will see :-)... and I must say wow... what a gripping tale.. I read this one twice. A little suspenseful. I'm intrigued by your lust. please please post another one. Thanks for posting this sweet dark poem. I love poems with good passionate endings... xox..Linda
Moore Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 1:40 PM
lol i have a lot of poems on all areas cant wait to post them .glad you like this one thanks linda x and thanx for helping me too
Carroll Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 1:08 PM
Hi Tina, Good mystical write.. Ken
Moore Avatar
September 13, 2013 at 1:15 PM
ken thank you i like a bit of mystery tina:)
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