The Dark Arts

The Dark Arts Resist the dark side Banish the triumphant eye Behold salvation

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Jim Marshal

Date: 8/11/2010 4:08:00 PM

Right on! Triumphant eye, illuminati? Enjoyed the senryu. Thanks for your comments too, nice to see another Marshall, apparently we once looked after horses or something.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/11/2010 9:10:00 AM

Read your comment on Rhonda's blog. Indeed, this is a miracle! The angels joined the surgeons in singing her favorite hymn during surgery. Rhonda sounded very optimistic this morning and said the hospital staff feel like they witnessed their first miracle. So happy for her! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2010 7:21:00 PM

HI, James. Nice to see your senryu, and thanks so much for your coments on my blog,I was interested in reading about the way your family is making you suffer as a vegetarian. hahaha. LUv, Andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 8/10/2010 10:27:00 AM

I banished the eye a few years ago - the eye was Jim Beam's. Dave

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 8/8/2010 7:13:00 AM

in the rejection of the darkside,grace is our salvation...nice senryu,with a light and compact meaning...peace , jay

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/7/2010 8:59:00 PM

The light always prevails in the end, Jimbo. Great job with your haiku! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/7/2010 8:43:00 PM

A nice angelic anthem to sing, James