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The Dancing Lights of Suburbia

Lights moving in time with the music at a mansion in a neighboring town Vibrations pounding through the stereo bugle hark you feel it escalate then drown projectors casting shadows of colorful hew raindrops falling to the sound windshield covered in dew and moistening the ground wishing to share that moment with everyone thereof but business interferes bestowment and it was aggregated by the one I love would have enjoyed it nor if intuition didn't find me last night I won't be discussing it to for just hope everything is alright

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 12/6/2020 6:58:00 PM
This puts me totally in the “let’s go look at Christmas lights” mood.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/9/2020 9:05:00 AM
It was fun :)
Date: 12/5/2020 9:20:00 AM
Lovely imagery in your poem, i have not seen many where i am..
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/5/2020 4:05:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. There weren't as many this year as were the years before. A lot of people not in the Christmas spirit, I guess.
Date: 12/4/2020 12:31:00 PM
At this time of year it is a delight watching Christmas lights everywhere. You project not only lights, but also lovely imagery, Angela:) Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/4/2020 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 12/4/2020 5:29:00 AM
Those lights you saw and sounds you heard are reminders of the festive season, Angela. Happiness to you!
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/4/2020 4:55:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay :)
Date: 12/3/2020 11:05:00 PM
Tomorrow is another day. Let's enjoy it while we can. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/4/2020 4:54:00 PM
yes :)
Date: 12/3/2020 8:39:00 PM
‘Tis the season of bright colorful lights... I hope you’ll enjoy more, my friend... hugs
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 12/4/2020 4:54:00 PM
Thank you, Akkina :)

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