Angela Crabtree Poet Rhyme

The Dancing Lights of Suburbia

Lights moving in time with the music
at a mansion in a neighboring town
Vibrations pounding through the stereo bugle
hark you feel it escalate then drown
projectors casting shadows of colorful hew
raindrops falling to the sound
windshield covered in dew
and moistening the ground
wishing to share that moment
with everyone thereof
but business interferes bestowment
and it was aggregated by the one I love
would have enjoyed it nor
if intuition didn't find me last night
I won't be discussing it to for
just hope everything is alright

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Caren Krutsinger December 6, 2020 at 6:58 PM This puts me totally in the “let’s go look at Christmas lights” mood. Angela Crabtree December 9, 2020 at 9:05 AM It was fun :)

Silent One December 5, 2020 at 9:20 AM Lovely imagery in your poem, i have not seen many where i am.. Angela Crabtree December 5, 2020 at 4:05 PM Thank you, Silent One. There weren't as many this year as were the years before. A lot of people not in the Christmas spirit, I guess.

Paul Callus December 4, 2020 at 12:31 PM At this time of year it is a delight watching Christmas lights everywhere. You project not only lights, but also lovely imagery, Angela:) Regards // paul Angela Crabtree December 4, 2020 at 5:32 PM Thank you, Paul :)

Vijay Pandit December 4, 2020 at 5:29 AM Those lights you saw and sounds you heard are reminders of the festive season, Angela. Happiness to you! Angela Crabtree December 4, 2020 at 4:55 PM Thank you, Vijay :)

Victor Buhagiar December 3, 2020 at 11:05 PM Tomorrow is another day. Let's enjoy it while we can. ~~ Angela Crabtree December 4, 2020 at 4:54 PM yes :)

Akkina Downing December 3, 2020 at 8:39 PM ‘Tis the season of bright colorful lights... I hope you’ll enjoy more, my friend... hugs Angela Crabtree December 4, 2020 at 4:54 PM Thank you, Akkina :)