The Dancer

She was a dancer She said it was all okay The power was hers

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Date: 2/6/2023 9:52:00 AM

Love this, E. In my "dancing days", I don't know that I ever felt "the power", but I certainly did feel free.

Date: 12/9/2022 2:13:00 AM

Alas I'm too old to dance. Lovely thought.

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 12/9/2022 2:07:00 PM

Ah, just a couple nods and shoulder twitch? If only the feet and hips would go where the heart desireth! Elizabeth

Date: 12/8/2022 10:06:00 AM

..."dance as if no one is watching".... Nicely done Elizabeth

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 12/8/2022 1:45:00 PM

Yes. Now if I would only stop watching myself! Thank you so much for the comment. Elizabeth

Date: 12/8/2022 9:44:00 AM

And so it was! Delightful, Elizabeth. I enjoyed it, and I could picture her.

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 12/8/2022 1:43:00 PM

Thank you, Milton. Not great poem, but sometimes I just have a thing I want to say. You are a good listener! Elizabeth