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Written: July 10, 2023 ______________________________________________________________ The rain poured, a symphony of tears. Washing away all the pain of yesterday. Each droplet is a harbinger of hope and appears As it danced upon the windowpane and sway. Every storm is followed by a rainbow. A promise of beauty after the decay Colors burst forth in a vibrant blow. Reminding us that joy can always find its way. Every cloud passes through such a mirage. A fleeting moment in the grand design. Even the darkest sky holds a corsage. A reminder that the sun will rise and shine Each morning, the world awakens anew. As the sun fills the earth with warmth. Its golden rays caress the land view Creating a tapestry of light forth. and shadows that dance on the ground, A symphony of colors and textures was found. Fresh horizons beckon, waiting to explore. As the sun's rays paint dreams upon the shore. Nothing remains the same; it is ever-changing. As a river that flows through the valleys and plains. The light of day will prevail, arranging Guiding us through the darkest lanes. We find the strength to rise above our pain. To embrace the beauty that emerges after the rain. For in every storm, there lies a hidden grace, A chance for growth and a fresh embrace.

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Date: 7/16/2023 6:19:00 AM
This is stunning and beautiful. Much truth in this poem from our lives. This is a Fave for me. I love the line...Even the darkest sky holds a corsage ! Well done :)
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Date: 7/13/2023 8:14:00 AM
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME WORK..
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Date: 7/11/2023 5:58:00 PM
Nature , Love and God the reasons we become victorious with our words. Inspiring others becoming immortal as we've heard.
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Date: 7/11/2023 12:58:00 PM
This is so well done, Sotto. You are really in tune with nature here!
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Date: 7/11/2023 12:06:00 PM
Heavy rains are followed by a glimpse of rainbow when birds and critters sing. There is constant change in universe, Nothing stays for ever,
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Date: 7/11/2023 11:35:00 AM
- You describe it with beautiful lines, Las ... when the sun comes after the rain ... the light, the hope and the pain ... new promises ... in a colorful harmony ... - A long-awaited rain shower is all well and good ... but when it first starts raining in July....it rains for many days here...seems like it has no end...a gray heavy blanket covers the sky - I wish you a wonderful vacation, my friend :) - hugs
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Date: 7/11/2023 7:57:00 AM
Every storm is followed by a rainbow-- A promise of beauty after the decay--beautiful descriptions throughout my friend. Enjoyed your story of renewal.
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Date: 7/11/2023 4:02:00 AM
Beautifully written, Lasaad. Wonderful imagery throughout this remarkable poem. You have a talent for writing great poetry, my friend. Keep up the good work...many blessings. Charlie
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Date: 7/10/2023 8:23:00 PM
Nothing remains the same. So very true and such an insight in this poem. Beautifully written Lasaard. My compliments. to such a master of the word.
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