The Dance

We almost danced,
but in the end, we just faked
the pas with stumbling.

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Lenny Gazbowski

April 6, 2016 at 9:27 AM

Deep three liner Diana.

Diana Bosa

April 6, 2016 at 2:05 PM

Thank you! :-)))

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 14, 2016 at 12:36 PM

- Thank you for your first poem, Diana :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Diana Bosa

March 16, 2016 at 2:23 PM

I thank you for reading it! :-) I'm sure I will. :-)

Poet Destroyer A

March 13, 2016 at 4:50 PM

Diana, thank you for the reply. I like haiku and free verse myself. I don't do well in other areas. If you have a free verse I'd like to read it. Have you tried the monoku form? It's a fun form... I have a contest up. Stop by and check it out... hugs. Linda

Diana Bosa

March 16, 2016 at 2:26 PM

No, I've never tried, but I really like to. :-) Thanks for the advice! :-)

Skat A

March 12, 2016 at 9:21 PM

Hi Diana, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Diana Bosa

March 13, 2016 at 3:51 PM

Hi SKAT, Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot. :-) Well, I use to write haikus and free verses, but being a rookie in the field of poetry, I know that I need to learn and evolve. But that's okay, I always enjoyed this kind of process. And I'm so glad that I can join PoetrySoup. :-) Diana

Poet Destroyer A

March 12, 2016 at 5:45 PM

Diana, lovely haiku, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Diana Bosa

March 13, 2016 at 3:52 PM

Hi Linda, Thank you for reading my poem, I'm so glad you liked it. :-) Though I mostly write haikus and free verses, I still consider myself as a rookie. So whenever you'd have an advice, please feel free to share with me. I'm pretty sure, it will be useful :-) And I'm happy that I can be a part of this inspiring circle of PoetrySoup. Diana

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