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The Dance

We almost danced,
but in the end we faked
the pas with stumbling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/6/2016 9:27:00 AM
Deep three liner Diana.
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Diana Bosa
Date: 4/6/2016 2:05:00 PM
Thank you! :-)))
Date: 3/14/2016 12:36:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Diana :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Diana Bosa
Date: 3/16/2016 2:23:00 PM
I thank you for reading it! :-) I'm sure I will. :-)
Date: 3/13/2016 4:50:00 PM
Diana, thank you for the reply. I like haiku and free verse myself. I don't do well in other areas. If you have a free verse I'd like to read it. Have you tried the monoku form? It's a fun form... I have a contest up. Stop by and check it out... hugs. Linda
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Diana Bosa
Date: 3/16/2016 2:26:00 PM
No, I've never tried, but I really like to. :-) Thanks for the advice! :-)
Date: 3/12/2016 9:21:00 PM
Hi Diana, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Diana Bosa
Date: 3/13/2016 3:51:00 PM
Hi SKAT, Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot. :-) Well, I use to write haikus and free verses, but being a rookie in the field of poetry, I know that I need to learn and evolve. But that's okay, I always enjoyed this kind of process. And I'm so glad that I can join PoetrySoup. :-) Diana
Date: 3/12/2016 5:45:00 PM
Diana, lovely haiku, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Diana Bosa
Date: 3/13/2016 3:52:00 PM
Hi Linda, Thank you for reading my poem, I'm so glad you liked it. :-) Though I mostly write haikus and free verses, I still consider myself as a rookie. So whenever you'd have an advice, please feel free to share with me. I'm pretty sure, it will be useful :-) And I'm happy that I can be a part of this inspiring circle of PoetrySoup. Diana