the Dance

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Written on April 10, 2025

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dancing in the wind, a stillness rushing thoughts, tis’ mental illness? breaking through the peace in soft light gusts pause over the ghostly night songs awash with flowing feelings the hand of God, posing healings amazing love makes it alright gusts pause over the ghostly night trembling gusts of wonder and hope rustling over hearts so they’ll cope this music will surely excite gusts pause over the ghostly night nature’s soundless beauty unfolds gentle flowers in shyest golds joyful splashes as the stars write gusts pause over the ghostly night only our Creator can know the wonders continue to glow poetry heals the heart’s lone fight gusts pause over the ghostly night remember the stars fading sigh only God knows the when and why forests ache, the trees such a sight! gusts pause over the ghostly night my soul trembles with the suspense it seems to have such a sixth sense sometimes falling down, but not quite gusts pause over the ghostly night dancing in the wind, a stillness rushing thoughts, tis’ mental illness? breaking through the peace in soft light gusts pause over the ghostly night

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