The Dainty Rose

The dainty rose stood proud of her tight thorns fragrance in garden

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/23/2018 4:40:00 PM

I love the conflict in your poem, and its loveliness!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/23/2018 12:48:00 PM

Breathtaking, Caren. "proud of her tight thorns" is so surprisingly awesome. Superbly done.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/23/2018 2:15:00 PM

Thank you. I love it when I somehow stumble into real poetry.

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/23/2018 10:14:00 AM

Sweet dainty tight thorns...sounds like a living thing...All the best Caren

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/23/2018 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much; it is a living thing. My rose bush almost died this week, but I clipped it back and she is once again proud!