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Contest: The Picture On The Parlour Wall

Sponsor: Craig Cornish

20 September 2024

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The curse of The Crying Boy

A young lad, upset, with a tear in his eye
It is but a picture and yet I ask why
What, in my parlour, makes him want to weep
Loneliness, hunger or fear of some creep?

It’s said that his presence will bring to you ill
Since one burnt out house had this boy hanging still
But rumour and legend don’t sway me at all 
Strange, how it suddenly fell from the wall 

I gazed at the spot where the painting was lying
My wife said I think I know why the boy’s crying
I think that he knew he’d crash down on the mat
But I don’t think he wanted to clobber the cat.
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Date: 9/21/2024 2:27:00 PM
Hello Terry, what a delightful read and made me smile. - Blessings, My Dear, Friend, Daniel
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/24/2024 3:04:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 9/20/2024 7:14:00 PM
Haha. Clobber the cat. You are a hoot, Terry.
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/24/2024 3:04:00 PM
I do ACTUALLY like cats… but sometimes I just can’t help myself ;-)
Date: 9/20/2024 12:46:00 AM
I remember that picture of a boy crying, your wife nailed the reason, there’s no denying. Great poetic humour… Beryl
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Date: 9/24/2024 3:03:00 PM
Thanks, Beryl. I’d actually forgotten about the curse when I began writing. Glad I was reminded (by Google’ as I might have run out of ideas after verse one ;-)
Date: 9/19/2024 7:59:00 PM
Leave it to the wife to 'bring things down to earth!' lol. ~ Gershon
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Date: 9/24/2024 3:01:00 PM
Anne’s mum had that very picture… weirdly, no one knows what became of it.
Date: 9/19/2024 5:00:00 PM
great ending, terry! best of luck in the contest...
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Terry Flood
Date: 9/19/2024 5:07:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene… I’ve read Craig’s sample poem and I doubt this is to his liking… but it is to mine! So we’ll see what we shall see. ;-) Your comment came through about three hours later than usual… caught me off guard!
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