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The Culprit was a Slime

She did not fully understand
Certainly not the promise-land
Charming until the big date
She wondered at her fate
Conversation was a bit blue
Her feelings were all askew
The culprit was a slime
Was he a known enzyme?
She caught herself in time
Which preserved her bliss sublime



Written 4-5-2019
Contest: 10 Lines Swords- Rhyme III Cash Prize
Sponsor: Lu Loo

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Date: 4/6/2019 6:54:00 AM
Very nicely done. Great flow and rhyming.
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Judy Dunbar
Date: 4/6/2019 11:42:00 AM
Lol. I know exactly what you mean. They are just something which your creativity can fight against.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/6/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Judy. It was a bit of a stretch, but it always is when there are RULES. I do not do rules well.
Date: 4/6/2019 3:24:00 AM
I saw this contest and as yet it never inspired me. You managed it well. Best for a win.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/6/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thank you Victor. I almost hesitated, for a formula is not "me".