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The Cry

The Cry ~~~~~~~~ Is she worthy of my love? A question I have asked more times Than I now can even dare to count A loss this heartfelt informs logics sire That this love no more Was indeed one of profound truth Emotions so deep and intrinsic Clash within and all about This discarded hollow vessel Bleeds profusely inside As a broken thing screams and howls This werebeast desires To walk once more as a man For a chance to live in light and joy And to have in this life More than just my daily prayer Forever unanswered

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/21/2010 2:45:00 AM
this was a good write i liked reading it Royal T.
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Date: 2/20/2010 2:34:00 AM
i love it. is she worthy of your love? WELL IS SHE! you find yourself lost because no woman will appreciate, or really fit with your deep love. keep the wise mind flowing, Edward. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/19/2010 8:01:00 PM
A sad poem, although very well written. How painful it is when our love is thrown away! Welcome to the Soup, Edward and I look forward to reading more of your work. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/19/2010 7:44:00 PM
GREAT POEM .SOUNDS LIKE A VAMPIRE MOVIE..UNTIL I READ THE END..ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM...IRMA
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Date: 2/14/2010 7:23:00 PM
I like this one. It has a haunting appeal. well, goodnight, it's about time for me to get offline! Luv,Andrea
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