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The Crustacean

edging to his home - the sea - lone beach comber risks life unknowingly Here is a horrible haiku for ya, Ironic! Hope you hate it! (for your worst poem contest)

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Skat A

Date: 5/16/2015 12:14:00 PM

wow... sad

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/6/2013 8:19:00 AM

Congrats on your winning haiku, Andrea. Thanks for your kind comments on my 'stint...'.~A.O

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/5/2013 7:08:00 PM

If I wrote this Haiku Iwould probably be happy with it. Than again I can't write Haikus which probably means this one is awful. Congratulations Andrea.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/5/2013 5:47:00 PM

Andrea, your poem is what it is! CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2013 11:32:00 PM

ha, an early haiku.... i like the image one can not see.... is this some kind of sea shrip or something...pd

Poet Destroyer A
Date: 5/5/2013 5:47:00 PM

ha ha...coming back to this comment... if you read this comment ,,i was not sure of the poem back then... LOL

Kash Poet

Date: 2/3/2011 11:36:00 AM

wonderful Haiku!---kashinath

Mitch White

Date: 4/24/2010 9:41:00 PM

Good Haiku It is quite similar- poor lil guy

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/24/2010 7:14:00 PM

nice work, enjoyed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/24/2010 1:31:00 PM

Wonderful words Andrea to the photo and good luck as u are on a roll dear friend in Raul's contests... I got the last entry for his current one as I was thinking not even to submit one but oh well.... if u don't try u don't know... sent u yahoo instructions for the photo change on blog... luv.. Linda-Marie

Daver Austin

Date: 4/24/2010 10:29:00 AM

Never mind. I just got it. I wasn't thinking "crustacean." Love, Dave

Daver Austin

Date: 4/24/2010 10:27:00 AM

Had to think about this one. Is there a tsunami on its way? What? Love, Dave

Jared Pickett

Date: 4/24/2010 9:43:00 AM

Great Haiku about the lonely crustacean..... Keep em comin'.....:JP]

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/24/2010 7:28:00 AM

enjoyed reading today--- you know first love is hardly everlasting.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/24/2010 6:33:00 AM

Love this one, Margaret, it makes one feel rather sad for the crab. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carrie

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/24/2010 6:23:00 AM

Interesting write, Andrea! The sea could be dangerous...Good luck for the contest and have a nice sunday. Thanks also for your kind comments...Love, Gert

Amy Green

Date: 4/23/2010 11:58:00 PM

Very cool!