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The Crustacean

edging to his home -
the sea - lone beach comber risks
life unknowingly


Here is a horrible haiku for ya, Ironic! Hope you hate it!
(for your worst poem contest)

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Skat A

May 16, 2015 at 12:14 PM

wow... sad

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

May 6, 2013 at 8:19 AM

Congrats on your winning haiku, Andrea. Thanks for your kind comments on my 'stint...'.~A.O

Richard Lamoureux

May 5, 2013 at 7:08 PM

If I wrote this Haiku Iwould probably be happy with it. Than again I can't write Haikus which probably means this one is awful. Congratulations Andrea.

Poet Destroyer A

May 5, 2013 at 5:47 PM

Andrea, your poem is what it is! CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

January 4, 2013 at 11:32 PM

ha, an early haiku.... i like the image one can not see.... is this some kind of sea shrip or something...pd

Poet Destroyer A

May 5, 2013 at 5:47 PM

ha ha...coming back to this comment... if you read this comment ,,i was not sure of the poem back then... LOL

Kash Poet

February 3, 2011 at 11:36 AM

wonderful Haiku!---kashinath

Mitch White

April 24, 2010 at 9:41 PM

Good Haiku It is quite similar- poor lil guy

Doris Culverhouse

April 24, 2010 at 7:14 PM

nice work, enjoyed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 24, 2010 at 1:31 PM

Wonderful words Andrea to the photo and good luck as u are on a roll dear friend in Raul's contests... I got the last entry for his current one as I was thinking not even to submit one but oh well.... if u don't try u don't know... sent u yahoo instructions for the photo change on blog... luv.. Linda-Marie

Daver Austin

April 24, 2010 at 10:29 AM

Never mind. I just got it. I wasn't thinking "crustacean." Love, Dave

Daver Austin

April 24, 2010 at 10:27 AM

Had to think about this one. Is there a tsunami on its way? What? Love, Dave

Jared Pickett

April 24, 2010 at 9:43 AM

Great Haiku about the lonely crustacean..... Keep em comin'.....:JP]

Doris Culverhouse

April 24, 2010 at 7:28 AM

enjoyed reading today--- you know first love is hardly everlasting.

Carrie Richards

April 24, 2010 at 6:33 AM

Love this one, Margaret, it makes one feel rather sad for the crab. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carrie

Gert W. Knop

April 24, 2010 at 6:23 AM

Interesting write, Andrea! The sea could be dangerous...Good luck for the contest and have a nice sunday. Thanks also for your kind comments...Love, Gert

Amy Green

April 23, 2010 at 11:58 PM

Very cool!

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