The Crustacean

edging to his home -
the sea - lone beach comber risks
life unknowingly


Here is a horrible haiku for ya, Ironic! Hope you hate it!
(for your worst poem contest)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/16/2015 12:14:00 PM
wow... sad
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:19:00 AM
Congrats on your winning haiku, Andrea. Thanks for your kind comments on my 'stint...'.~A.O
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Date: 5/5/2013 7:08:00 PM
If I wrote this Haiku Iwould probably be happy with it. Than again I can't write Haikus which probably means this one is awful. Congratulations Andrea.
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:47:00 PM
Andrea, your poem is what it is! CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA
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Date: 1/4/2013 11:32:00 PM
ha, an early haiku.... i like the image one can not see.... is this some kind of sea shrip or something...pd
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:47:00 PM
ha ha...coming back to this comment... if you read this comment ,,i was not sure of the poem back then... LOL
Date: 2/3/2011 11:36:00 AM
wonderful Haiku!---kashinath
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Date: 4/24/2010 9:41:00 PM
Good Haiku It is quite similar- poor lil guy
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:14:00 PM
nice work, enjoyed.
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Date: 4/24/2010 1:31:00 PM
Wonderful words Andrea to the photo and good luck as u are on a roll dear friend in Raul's contests... I got the last entry for his current one as I was thinking not even to submit one but oh well.... if u don't try u don't know... sent u yahoo instructions for the photo change on blog... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:29:00 AM
Never mind. I just got it. I wasn't thinking "crustacean." Love, Dave
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:27:00 AM
Had to think about this one. Is there a tsunami on its way? What? Love, Dave
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Date: 4/24/2010 9:43:00 AM
Great Haiku about the lonely crustacean..... Keep em comin'.....:JP]
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:28:00 AM
enjoyed reading today--- you know first love is hardly everlasting.
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:33:00 AM
Love this one, Margaret, it makes one feel rather sad for the crab. Good luck in the contest! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:23:00 AM
Interesting write, Andrea! The sea could be dangerous...Good luck for the contest and have a nice sunday. Thanks also for your kind comments...Love, Gert
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Date: 4/23/2010 11:58:00 PM
Very cool!
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