Eve Roper Poet Footle

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The Crushing Depth On a Submarine

deep sea
would be
new  bub
on sub
fall down
long frown
nerves shot
gut knot
crush depth
last breath
light red
hope fed
want live
may give
can’t bear
no air

2/13/2022

A Strand (1073) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand



inspired by the movie Black Sea

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Lindsay Laurie February 19, 2022 at 4:23 PM Hello Eve ... your footle tells so much in so few words - well done Eve - Lindsay

William Kelii Kekaula February 16, 2022 at 1:43 AM An intriguing film and a must-see! I love your terse-versed footle, Eve, and my compliments for your winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers!

Paulette Calasibetta February 14, 2022 at 6:03 PM Your imagery tells the whole story! Well done and congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette

Lonna Blodgett February 14, 2022 at 12:27 PM Great creative write Eve. It always amazes me how one can take brevity and turn it into an entire novel! Lonna Eve Roper February 14, 2022 at 2:38 PM Lonna, it is amazing what one can do with the least amount. Thank you for reading my verse. Blessings my friend