The Crushing Depth On a Submarine

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Black Sea [DVD]

deep sea would be new bub on sub fall down long frown nerves shot gut knot crush depth last breath light red hope fed want live may give can’t bear no air 2/13/2022 A Strand (1073) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand inspired by the movie Black Sea

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/19/2022 4:23:00 PM

Hello Eve ... your footle tells so much in so few words - well done Eve - Lindsay

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/16/2022 1:43:00 AM

An intriguing film and a must-see! I love your terse-versed footle, Eve, and my compliments for your winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers!

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/14/2022 6:03:00 PM

Your imagery tells the whole story! Well done and congratulations on your win in the contest. :)Paulette

Lonna Blodgett

Date: 2/14/2022 12:27:00 PM

Great creative write Eve. It always amazes me how one can take brevity and turn it into an entire novel! Lonna

Eve Roper
Date: 2/14/2022 2:38:00 PM

Lonna, it is amazing what one can do with the least amount. Thank you for reading my verse. Blessings my friend