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The Crossing

I crossed the old bridge to watch your transparent words drift farther downstream PD's contest: River Walk 8/25/14

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Len Gasun

Date: 9/8/2014 8:57:00 AM

I love this great senryu of yours my dear friend Carrie. Many warm congratulations on your win! Big sweet hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2014 5:21:00 AM

- Well deserved, Carrie .... 2nd place !!! - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2014 10:41:00 PM

wow. DEEP like that river. Congrats on a great win.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/6/2014 11:17:00 AM

wow. this one is breathtaking. congratulatuions on your win.

Faye Gibson

Date: 9/6/2014 9:11:00 AM

I am floating after those words, Carrie...have to know what they say. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/6/2014 8:49:00 AM

I really like this Haiku Carrie. Congratulations on your win.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/6/2014 7:47:00 AM

Congratulations, Carrie, on your great win! Well deserved with this lovely haiku! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2014 6:51:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) I enjoyed reading this a second time. Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/5/2014 11:15:00 PM

Carrie, Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/5/2014 11:13:00 PM

Oh I like it! Grats on your win :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/26/2014 1:58:00 PM

Great imagery... I can feel my self being pulled along....hugs Tim

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/26/2014 7:11:00 AM

You crossed it to watch transparent words, but have not burnt the old bridge, Carrie

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 8/25/2014 9:10:00 PM

i love the words. good luck.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/25/2014 8:19:00 PM

this is wonderful, carrie! good luck in the contest...

Jan Allison

Date: 8/25/2014 6:30:00 PM

Beautiful Senryu Carrie, Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx