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The Crossing

 I crossed the old bridge

to watch your transparent words

drift farther downstream





PD's contest: River Walk
8/25/14

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Len Gasun

September 8, 2014 at 8:57 AM

I love this great senryu of yours my dear friend Carrie. Many warm congratulations on your win! Big sweet hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 7, 2014 at 5:21 AM

- Well deserved, Carrie .... 2nd place !!! - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest: "River Walk" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2014 at 10:41 PM

wow. DEEP like that river. Congrats on a great win.

Maurice Yvonne

September 6, 2014 at 11:17 AM

wow. this one is breathtaking. congratulatuions on your win.

Faye Gibson

September 6, 2014 at 9:11 AM

I am floating after those words, Carrie...have to know what they say. Congrats.

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 6, 2014 at 8:49 AM

I really like this Haiku Carrie. Congratulations on your win.

Pandita Sietesantos

September 6, 2014 at 7:47 AM

Congratulations, Carrie, on your great win! Well deserved with this lovely haiku! Pandita

Jan Allison

September 6, 2014 at 6:51 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Carrie:-) I enjoyed reading this a second time. Hugs Jan xxx

Poet Destroyer A

September 5, 2014 at 11:15 PM

Carrie, Congratulations, on an awesome River Walk, Win:):):) Enjoy the smiles, and my blog, You're a "River Legend" if you'd like or have time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~