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The Critic

A balancing act Critique with no disrespect Too easy to fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/4/2009 6:11:00 PM
Today I learned the difference between Senryu and Haiku. I think this is Senryu, so I'm switching it.
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Date: 8/4/2009 6:06:00 AM
Good Morning Squooky. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:02:00 PM
So much truth in your words. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/3/2009 10:05:00 AM
You've got that one right. Keep writing. Sara
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