The Critic

A balancing act
Critique with no disrespect
Too easy to fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 4, 2009 at 6:11 PM
Today I learned the difference between Senryu and Haiku. I think this is Senryu, so I'm switching it.
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August 4, 2009 at 6:06 AM
Good Morning Squooky. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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August 3, 2009 at 1:02 PM
So much truth in your words. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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August 3, 2009 at 10:05 AM
You've got that one right. Keep writing. Sara
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