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The Crescent Moon

Moonrise and showers Enshrine flowers A stroll along the shoreline Starlight and halos Eternal cosmos The awakening angel Lullabies and shadows Mystifies meadows The calypso personifies Coral and fireflies Rainbow skies The radiant circle aglow Butterflies and ladybugs Intertwine jitterbugs The dance along the skyline

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J Hamilton Gist

Date: 9/15/2019 3:45:00 PM

Nice one here! Check out my Drunken Moon Haiku when you have a time.

Edmund Strempfl

Date: 8/3/2019 12:28:00 AM

Enjoyable and soothing to read

G. Jay
Date: 8/3/2019 1:58:00 PM

appreciative your comment.

Franci Hoffman

Date: 7/24/2019 9:47:00 AM

Stunning imagery and flow. Bravo!

G. Jay
Date: 8/3/2019 1:57:00 PM

Thanks Franci. Glad you like it.

David Drowley

Date: 7/23/2019 8:32:00 AM

G. Great appreciation of nature. Nice crisp imagery. David

G. Jay
Date: 7/23/2019 11:27:00 PM

Thank you David for dropping a comment. Glad you liked it.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/23/2019 8:13:00 AM

Nice Piece. Very good flow. I am fond of Crescent Moon rather than Full Moon. Best Wishes.

G. Jay
Date: 7/23/2019 11:24:00 PM

) smile. :) Thanks.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/12/2018 3:37:00 PM

such sweet imagery, I especially love the final stanza:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

G. Jay
Date: 12/13/2018 2:25:00 AM

Thank you.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/12/2018 5:46:00 AM

G, there are some interesting images in your entry. Congratulations on your placement. There were many good entries, including yours. Thank you for participating in the contest. Best wishes, Carolyn

G. Jay
Date: 7/23/2019 11:20:00 PM

Sorry for the delayed response. Thank you Carolyn.