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The Creek

sounds of running water moving and swirling over rocks animals will drink from P.R.Deremer

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/17/2015 1:36:00 AM

Simple and true. Love the imagery in your write Pam.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/16/2015 3:15:00 PM

Good nature work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/16/2015 3:16:00 PM

Thank you also.

Skat A

Date: 10/16/2015 1:08:00 PM

nature has her way in refreshing herself for the animals to enjoy a drink. I like the imagery. SKAT

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/16/2015 1:24:00 PM

Thank you.

James Horn

Date: 10/14/2015 6:35:00 AM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/so_sad_this_to_share_716242 This is it. Jim Horn

James Horn

Date: 10/14/2015 6:34:00 AM

http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/so_sad_this_to_share_716242 This is it. Jim Horn

James Horn

Date: 10/14/2015 6:31:00 AM

A 6-8-6 haiku. Interesting. Jim Horn

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/15/2015 3:36:00 PM

moving has 2, and is 1, swirling is 2 over is 1, and rocks is 1 making 7

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2015 3:55:00 PM

Nice image of the animals at the creek.

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/13/2015 4:20:00 PM

Thank you.

Ken Jordan

Date: 10/12/2015 8:55:00 PM

Beautiful Haiku Pam, all the best Ken

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/13/2015 11:40:00 AM

Thank you.

James Horn

Date: 10/11/2015 5:28:00 AM

PD, Check out my creek haiku. Jim Horn

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/13/2015 11:39:00 AM

I looked and couldn't find your creek haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/8/2015 3:50:00 AM

- A lovely haiku,Pam - // Anne-Lise :)

Pam Deremer
Date: 10/8/2015 12:05:00 PM

Thank you.