The Creek

sounds of running water


moving and swirling over rocks


animals will drink from


                 P.R.Deremer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Tor Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 1:36 AM
Simple and true. Love the imagery in your write Pam.
Kendrick Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Good nature work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Deremer Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 3:16 PM
Thank you also.
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October 16, 2015 at 1:08 PM
nature has her way in refreshing herself for the animals to enjoy a drink. I like the imagery. SKAT
Deremer Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 1:24 PM
Thank you.
Horn Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 6:35 AM
http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/so_sad_this_to_share_716242 This is it. Jim Horn
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October 14, 2015 at 6:34 AM
http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/so_sad_this_to_share_716242 This is it. Jim Horn
Horn Avatar
October 14, 2015 at 6:31 AM
A 6-8-6 haiku. Interesting. Jim Horn
Deremer Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 3:36 PM
moving has 2, and is 1, swirling is 2 over is 1, and rocks is 1 making 7
Dietrich Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 3:55 PM
Nice image of the animals at the creek.
Deremer Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Thank you.
Jordan Avatar
October 12, 2015 at 8:55 PM
Beautiful Haiku Pam, all the best Ken
Deremer Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 11:40 AM
Thank you.
Horn Avatar
October 11, 2015 at 5:28 AM
PD, Check out my creek haiku. Jim Horn
Deremer Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 11:39 AM
I looked and couldn't find your creek haiku.
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:50 AM
- A lovely haiku,Pam - // Anne-Lise :)
Deremer Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Thank you.
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