The Creek

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The creek
                  Gurgling, tingling
Over rocks rushing to
                  Eddies for stillness and some quiet
The stream  
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Anish Avatar
August 8, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Once again you have shown your mastery of the cinquain. Fine work.- Soup Mail for you! Peace & love Matthew Anish
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Good description, Sara. I like that word eddies!
Horne Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 9:31 AM
I could imagine being there, my friend - great descriptions. I don't think I've ever tried this form - looks like great fun - must try it.
Grisetti Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 7:05 PM
Such a lovely, quiet stream. Peaceful and soothing.
Sivey Avatar
August 5, 2012 at 6:41 PM
This is a truly soft and delightful write! I just love the peace and calm that goes with water, though sometimes it can be treacherous, but here is quite peaceful! what a remarkable piece my friend! Great Work!!
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