The Creature

My creature you have walked in sin
You have tasted of my wrath
Yet savoured as you groaned within
when you felt me pull you forth

You've wrestled with a demon strong
Gave deceptions place of rest
Yet even they could not for long
pull my creature from my breast

All their schemes and poisoned darts
unknown to them were aimed
towards a creature in whose heart
was already etched my name

Because your soul moaned in dismay
for the slumbered state you were
I raised my hand that death not stay
and revived you with my stir

Because my glory was your desire
I had compassion on your cries
I broke the traps with arms of fire
and gently salved your eyes

With water did I soothe your face
I washed and cleansed your feet
My creature know you have my grace
and take again your seat

for you have journeyed past the night
accepted you are not your own
Now take heed to walk with me in light
that I safely lead you home

Behold your God Oh creature made
Thou art my love's manifestation
I am your God who never fails
to quicken his creation...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/1/2012 1:49:00 PM
lovely spiritual write, my friend
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 5/1/2012 3:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Jack...I appreciate it...Love Diana
Date: 4/29/2012 4:12:00 PM
Smile ˜ "Come Here My Sweeet Baby * That I May Lay My Head Upon Your Breast ˜ As Your Beauty, Fills Me With Your Tender Love ˜ Such A Beautiful Poem ˜ My Love To You, John!:) ˜
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/29/2012 5:08:00 PM
God bless you Jphn...Love Diana
Date: 4/26/2012 2:10:00 PM
A very skillfully written account of salvation beautifly stated. May the joy of life light your way. Huggs TLee
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/26/2012 3:00:00 PM
God bless you Terry... Love Diana
Date: 4/14/2012 7:38:00 PM
Very beautiful. I have a poem that I wrote a long long time ago that I think you might like it is called My Wish For Eternity, I will post it next . TLee
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Date: 4/14/2012 2:54:00 PM
This poem is beautiful Diana! I love the meaning and the rhyme ...Samia
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/14/2012 3:00:00 PM
I appreciate your comment Samia..Thank you..
Date: 4/14/2012 12:17:00 PM
nicely done Diana... thanks for those kind words...be sure to check out the resources section... blessings....Joseph
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/14/2012 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Joseph..
Date: 4/13/2012 10:27:00 PM
This quite an interesting poem. Also, thanks for your comment on my work.
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:49:00 PM
great interesting poetry here...
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:27:00 PM
Powerful words.Great write.
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/13/2012 6:36:00 PM
I always appreciate your comment Elliott, Thank you..
Date: 4/13/2012 4:59:00 PM
That's a very heartfelt expressed story poem,thanks for sharing it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/13/2012 5:52:00 PM
Appreciated Erich
Date: 4/13/2012 4:17:00 PM
a wonderful Psalm.
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/13/2012 5:51:00 PM
Thank you..
Date: 4/13/2012 4:10:00 PM
Wow! This is very powerful! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry! :o)
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Diana Mohammed
Date: 4/13/2012 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Dan..
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