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The Creation

you say you want the world and everything is your creation you are not even strong enough to rule a nation when you start your dreams go to creamation as much as you want it to be true when people say something you think their making fun of you your insilence will be the end of you thats not the case you dont have the pace to win the race before i saygoobye look in my eye i garentee you will die *this is a peopm me and my friend made to get rid of stress on a person we dont like so not all credit goes to me*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/7/2011 5:45:00 PM
omg love cant wait to read more love ya two <3
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:29:00 PM
yes my good friend denis garcia
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:10:00 PM
yeah im the one that made this poem with hm
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:09:00 AM
What a beautiful week of posting and sharing of some amazing poetry. So happy to see your poetry among them Dennis. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets also. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:41:00 AM
grats to you and your friend and this great poem hope it relieved some stress Luv*Skat
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Denis Garcia
Date: 6/2/2011 3:10:00 PM
im the friend

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