The Creation

you say you want the world and everything is your creation
you are not even strong enough to rule a nation
when you start your dreams go to creamation

as much as you want it to be true
when people say something you think their making fun of you
your insilence will be the end of you

thats not the case
you dont have the pace
to win the race

before i saygoobye
look in my eye
i garentee you will die

*this is a peopm me and my friend made to get rid of stress on a person we dont like
so not all credit goes to me*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/7/2011 5:45:00 PM
omg love cant wait to read more love ya two <3
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Date: 6/2/2011 5:29:00 PM
yes my good friend denis garcia
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Date: 6/2/2011 3:10:00 PM
yeah im the one that made this poem with hm
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:09:00 AM
What a beautiful week of posting and sharing of some amazing poetry. So happy to see your poetry among them Dennis. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets also. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:41:00 AM
grats to you and your friend and this great poem hope it relieved some stress Luv*Skat
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Denis Garcia
Date: 6/2/2011 3:10:00 PM
im the friend
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