The County Fair a Fun Place

How exciting to walk down the midway
with all the crowds, the vendors to hear what they say.
    
Oh look to your left, it's all the games!
Many people playing them, all variety of names.
    
To our right are the many shows.
And in these days we know that just about anything goes.
      
Hey look! Should we ride the Ferris Wheel?
It's so high it's bound to give us quite a thrill!
     
Let's try all of the rides, they are so cool!
They even have one where you can ride a mule.
        
We'll have hotdogs, popcorn and cotton candy.
All the foods they have are always so dandy.
        
Yes, the County Fair is the fun place to go.
If you have the time and the money to blow!






For Unamed County Fair contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/31/2013 8:48:00 PM
This poem really re-creates all the fun of the fair.....love it. we called cotton candy-fairy floss he he SuZ
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Date: 7/26/2012 6:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lisa's "Unnamed County Fair"contest Marty. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/23/2012 12:08:00 PM
Congrates on your win! Jane XoXo
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Date: 7/23/2012 3:25:00 AM
Marty congrats on your win, love it..David
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Date: 7/14/2012 12:41:00 AM
lots of money these days cant believe how much they charge now
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Date: 7/12/2012 10:00:00 AM
Awesome...I was taken back to my childhood, only to be slapped with the reality...'Time and money to blow' hahaha Nice Job!!!
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Date: 7/11/2012 12:31:00 PM
‡ Hi Marty, Tis A Perfect Summer Breezes Pleasant & Wonderful Verse * Memories & Owww Sooo Beautiful, Truly * I Love To Meet Friends & You Seem Sooo Lovely At Least, Amid Your Kind Visit & This Dreamful Walk About The Glitterings Midway * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:57:00 PM
A very fun poem bringing back to me the memories of those wonderful days of my childhood!
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Date: 7/6/2012 12:59:00 PM
what's a fair without cotton candy....thanks for stopping by Marty...best wishes in the contest...Joseph
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:52:00 AM
A fun poem... I like... good luck in the contest... Terry
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Marty Owens
Date: 7/6/2012 10:55:00 AM
Thanks for the nice comments Terry...it's appreciated.
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