The Countdown Reached Zero

      The crew waved their goodbyes 
          assumed their positions
       their space-ship was cleared to go

       the countdown reached zero
          there could be a new hero ~
       Would the media let people know
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Rolland Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 3:47 PM
don't know the answer, media are so intriguing, enjoyed the idea
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 10:57 AM
I wonder how many expeditions are under the radar...
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 23, 2025 at 6:01 AM
A sublime poliucal poem perhaps? Well expressed. Kudos! ????°°?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<< Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
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