The Count

Frozen grip takes hold Dead eyes look, the end is near Kiss of ice, last breath.

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Anton Smith

Date: 9/12/2015 4:39:00 PM

Very good haiku, creates deep imagery. Well dove! :) Would you care to take a look at my Facebook page: https://www.facebook.com/Raven3.gothic?ref=tn_tnmn Many thanks!

Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 9/13/2015 5:06:00 AM

Pleased you dropped by and read 'The Count', your comment is appreciated. Occasionally vampires invade my poems, hopefully this diversion is looked on kindly. Best wishes Delice Thank you for invite to visit facebook.

SKAT A

Date: 5/27/2015 8:16:00 AM

That's shocking imagery

Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 5/27/2015 10:04:00 AM

True, vampires are to be avoided LOL

Sunshine Smile

Date: 5/19/2015 2:42:00 AM

- Good morning from Norway, Delice :) - A deep Haiku ..... well done! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunshine Smile
Date: 5/19/2015 4:43:00 AM

:))

Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 5/19/2015 4:42:00 AM

Greetings from Ireland Anne-Lise. Every once in awhile my haiku writing gets invaded by vampires. LOL