The Cosmic Dance

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From a foaming, combustible plasma, Emerged into the universe of cosmic drama. Expanding vastly in every direction, Creating a spectacle beyond comprehension. Nebulas, stars, and galaxies are born. A cosmic dance, never forlorn. Gravity force, a constant pull, Shape and mold the universe full. Black holes, quasars, and pulsars too A cosmos that is foreign and brand new. Dark matter, mysterious and unknown, A cosmic dance, forever shown Time and space are intertwined. The universe is forever defined From the Big Bang to now, A cosmic dance, never to bow. So look up to the vast expanse, And witness the cosmic dance. A spectacle above any belief The universe is forever in relief. Written: June 14, 2023

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Jay Narain

Date: 6/15/2023 9:37:00 AM

A cosmic event unfolding before eyes. A good poem with scientific vibes. Like it.

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 6/15/2023 2:22:00 AM

If only we could admire the universe in its vast expanse.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/15/2023 1:48:00 AM

"so look up to the vast expanse, and witness this cosmic dance", It is as you said a spectacle above any one's belief. an I am so glad you wrote this very uplifting and spiritual poem

Speaks Volumes

Date: 6/14/2023 11:23:00 PM

A view of cosmic frivolity. Movement and vibrant activity in a spectacle beyond belief, set to lyrical words and phrases. Poetry at its best, I feel refreshed just having read it.