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The Core of You

Just look hard into the core of you

if, for the luckless needy,
 your masked generosity
   springs from smug condescension
    thinly disguising disdain;

if your act of charity
 makes one feel like a beggar
  and you glorify yourself,
   cruelly rubbing it in;

if your seeming kindness flows
 from a sense of proud power
  that so aches to be flaunted
   and gratefully acknowledged,

then, look hard into the core of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/4/2008 11:42:00 AM
a well put together piece of poetry that came staight from the heart. enjoyed reading it.
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