The Continuing Saga of Zack Waverly

ROTGUT  NEIGHBORS by JTC    
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The Sun rose up that day
To continue what it started
And baked the soft brown clay
From the lake that had departed
Not a drop of water present
Not a cloud to blot the sky
For three years they've been waiting
To watched their land go dry
The Lake that fed the towns
The water that they needed
Month by month and inch by inch
They watched as it receded 
It got so dry, that passerby's 
Sensed no life around
Mainly indicated, by the
Bones and skulls they found
Not a bird seen flying by
Nor a tree for them to perch
Just some buzzards in the sky
Circling round as on a search  

To be continued............
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Harrell Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 8:31 AM
Good descriptions. On to next :)
Nance Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 5:06 PM
I tell ya truthfully I wasn't going to do an entry then I read your update and it said you wanted it to be like an rpg so it hooked me, I used to be a huge gamer girl, wish I would have gotten in on the good earlier, now I can't wait to see the whole story unfold!
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:46 PM
Oooh can't wait for Rotgut saga to be continued Jerry .... I really enjoyed the challenge of your contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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