The Constant Wonder

I no longer breath the same air you do
Never more I will bow down the same god you play as who
I don’t believe in fairy tails much less a liar
For I never believed in myself to start clean
Now baptize my idea and set me off this chains
I reunited the last of us and become a disposable can
I am what I am not because of you but by the roar
That heart warming sound when the devil wants your soul
I don’t know the world the way you do surely never how I become a piece of rusty metal
I am not the rain to caress your tears
Never will I be the sun to warm your inner winter’s 
Only inside your soul I command not again
I am king but of the most darkest slumber aside the win
We are races to catch the flight
Because we were never able to conquer the fight
Today yet tomorrow I continue to be caught
Away in the sorrow I drive into nothingness
Seduce me out of this depression my sweet princess
I only mourn for your love dead so long ago
Save me tonight and I shall save you forever as agro
Don’t become dormant for my vengeance will take a tall
I am the nightmare of the nightmares intent
We no longer cry far from thought
I have become the thought and the radical
For I am not the radiant but surely the end
Nothing like the night’s darkness to caress over my body so dead
I am you and you are me and I become what you never became as you were one
One to suffer and cry but enjoy as rely
But your are not what I rely when I ask to fly
We are the creed never born into the zone
Carry me away my devil girl for I need to be lost in the embers of your lies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/5/2015 12:05:00 PM
Very nicely wrote. Keep your head up, it'll get better. Promise!
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Derek Ortiz
Date: 2/12/2015 1:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Andy and things are surely going great from the time I wrote this. Thank you once more!
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