The Common Flowers

Had I not seen you closely I would have missed the truth
You and I share the cup teeming in the pink of the youth

The waiting nostrils inhale the flavour of the black coffee
Both of us look into the mirror and look for the poppy

When the stars arrive at the red and green study window
We though oceans apart form the  flame to melt the snow

The fun and wisdom that play out in the owl's circling eye
In our poem we incorporate them in a way they never die

You excel in painting the vampire and the luncheon guest
I widen my eyes with wonder and rue at my hollow chest

We've the same wavelength as we raise the standing wave
Our wine glasses cheers as the keen ocean kisses the cave

With the fragrance of the foliage we love to fill our lungs
We love  the lurching moonlight as on our  lips it comes

Isn't the lamp more eloquent as we walk the same passage
Leading to the poetry of the bonding and the grey breakage

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May 9, 2018 // Art
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Gauthier Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir. Well done.
Gupta Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 5:31 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Haight Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 4:51 PM
A lovely Couplet poem, Probir! Congratulations on your podium win. Sandra
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June 3, 2018 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Sandra ...
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 4:09 PM
what lovely couplets Probir, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Gupta Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Thank you, Jan ... I'm glad you like it ...
Gentry Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 2:08 PM
A beautiful and wonderfully expressed poem fot the what we have in common contest. Congratulations on your placement.
Gupta Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Thanks, Susan ... You always encourage ...
Roper Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 11:14 AM
This is very beautiful, Probir, I see why Kim loved it Hug eve
Gupta Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 7:22 PM
Thank you, Eve ... and when you read it first, you couldn't perhaps relate it to Kim's contest ... Am I right? ... And that is interesting !...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 8:58 AM
Probir, this is quite lovely! Congrats! Hugs..Kim
Gupta Avatar
May 21, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Thank you so much, Kim for considering my poem at 5 at least ... The game has been acknowledged ... Great ! ...
Tanwar Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 11:51 PM
wow..it beautiful this relation and connection you have made is beautiful and lovely
Gupta Avatar
May 15, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Thank you so much ...
Murray Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 5:04 PM
Like twin flames? How well they interact together. Beautifully done Probir.
Gupta Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 12:59 AM
Thank you, Jean ... Glad you like ...
Roper Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Enjoyed reading,Probir, Maria is right that first line gives a feeling of love.Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Sands Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:16 AM
A beautifully written poem Probir. I enjoyed this :)
Gupta Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Beautiful set of couplets Probir and a true work of art. I particularly love your opening couplets, and the story unfolds in the subsequent verses...Maria :)
Gupta Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thank you, Maria ...
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