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The Common Flowers

Had I not seen you closely I would have missed the truth You and I share the cup teeming in the pink of the youth The waiting nostrils inhale the flavour of the black coffee Both of us look into the mirror and look for the poppy When the stars arrive at the red and green study window We though oceans apart form the flame to melt the snow The fun and wisdom that play out in the owl's circling eye In our poem we incorporate them in a way they never die You excel in painting the vampire and the luncheon guest I widen my eyes with wonder and rue at my hollow chest We've the same wavelength as we raise the standing wave Our wine glasses cheers as the keen ocean kisses the cave With the fragrance of the foliage we love to fill our lungs We love the lurching moonlight as on our lips it comes Isn't the lamp more eloquent as we walk the same passage Leading to the poetry of the bonding and the grey breakage ____________________________________________________ May 9, 2018 // Art

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Date: 6/2/2018 9:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Probir. Well done.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 6/3/2018 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, Line ...
Date: 5/22/2018 4:51:00 PM
A lovely Couplet poem, Probir! Congratulations on your podium win. Sandra
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Date: 6/3/2018 5:32:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra ...
Date: 5/21/2018 4:09:00 PM
what lovely couplets Probir, Many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:17:00 PM
Thank you, Jan ... I'm glad you like it ...
Date: 5/21/2018 2:08:00 PM
A beautiful and wonderfully expressed poem fot the what we have in common contest. Congratulations on your placement.
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:18:00 PM
Thanks, Susan ... You always encourage ...
Date: 5/21/2018 11:14:00 AM
This is very beautiful, Probir, I see why Kim loved it Hug eve
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:22:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ... and when you read it first, you couldn't perhaps relate it to Kim's contest ... Am I right? ... And that is interesting !...
Date: 5/21/2018 8:58:00 AM
Probir, this is quite lovely! Congrats! Hugs..Kim
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim for considering my poem at 5 at least ... The game has been acknowledged ... Great ! ...
Date: 5/12/2018 11:51:00 PM
wow..it beautiful this relation and connection you have made is beautiful and lovely
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Date: 5/15/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so much ...
Date: 5/10/2018 5:04:00 PM
Like twin flames? How well they interact together. Beautifully done Probir.
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:59:00 AM
Thank you, Jean ... Glad you like ...
Date: 5/9/2018 12:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading,Probir, Maria is right that first line gives a feeling of love.Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/11/2018 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 5/9/2018 8:16:00 AM
A beautifully written poem Probir. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 5/9/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 5/9/2018 8:00:00 AM
Beautiful set of couplets Probir and a true work of art. I particularly love your opening couplets, and the story unfolds in the subsequent verses...Maria :)
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Date: 5/9/2018 9:02:00 AM
Thank you, Maria ...

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