The Commercialization of Life

……..And then things changed

Gizmos and gadgets replaced marbles and jacks

Hopscotch and See-Saw almost lost in the past  

Dinner at the table to dinner in our rooms 

Holy Days to Holidays - 

No time to give thanks.

No time for rest and family and friends

Relationships dying –

Lost to the commercialization of life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 10, 2012 at 5:34 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Velyn. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
Cooper Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:58 AM
Thank you so much fo ryour warm welcome and encouraging words. Velyn
Collins Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 9:23 AM
so true, Velyn. Happy Easter. Kathy
Cooper Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Thank you and I hope you enjoyed your Easter as well.,
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April 7, 2012 at 11:06 PM
Velyn..love your poem.. have yourself a wonderful and Happy Easter, good night~ PD
Cooper Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:59 AM
Thank you so much and I hope you had a fantabulous Easter.
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April 7, 2012 at 9:12 AM
How sad, but true. A number of my best memories have been commercialized.
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