The Colours Have It

A water colour cloud of blue obscures the scene below,
where pastel bodies testify to a subtle change of hue.
Through gun smoke mist the flags display no different colour shade,
as all across the battlefield the trumpets blue notes fade.
The cerulean sky attires herself with cloak of slate blue tone,
and azure tears of helplessness fall on true blue bleaching bones.

The colours have It Competition
David Wallace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Congrats on your win, David! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 1:19 PM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "The Colors Have It" contest David. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 6:45 AM
Congratulations David on a smashing win xx
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 11:18 PM
I love how you gave different shades of blue. Blue is one of my favorites, DAvid. I hope one day to own a shimmering ice blue sports car!! congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:57 PM
congrats David on a marvelous write and win for this gorgeous clor of poetic artistry luv..
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March 2, 2012 at 7:35 PM
DAVID... congratulations! WITH YOUR CONTEST WIN!! *Enjoyed stopping by to view may winners tonight!! Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
A   Avatar
February 29, 2012 at 8:48 PM
DAVID, GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST... WITH YOUR DEEP POEM..THANK YOU 4 SHARING, ALWAYS~PD
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February 29, 2012 at 4:52 AM
This poem is a pleasure to read David,thank you for written it.Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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