The Colors of Sleep

dreams like cinema
grow wilder in the mind's eye...
I can't turn away.



for Black -Eyed Susan's senyru contest
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Anglesey Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 4:51 PM
You captured the dream experience so vividly. Very nice :)
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 9:36 AM
Fine senriyu with images, Deb
Andresen Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 7:49 AM
- Very nice description, Deb!! - Luck in contest!!! - Have a nice Sunday, we have a wonderful beautiful Autumn day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
October 13, 2013 at 6:53 AM
This is awesome, this is a wonderful write my friend! I am amazed by the splendor of this harmonious poem this morning! What a phenomenal piece! Great Work!!
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