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The Color Yellow

Dandelions, butter, roses. Sight of circus bright clown noses. Plane where tawny lion dozes. Shades displaying, sunny days with sprinkling hoses. Children playing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/19/2017 1:10:00 PM
so sweet and tender. You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 7/19/2017 8:32:00 PM
Hi Funom, your comment is so outstanding. I can see you gave my limerick a lot of thought responding in such an intelligent way.
Date: 7/19/2017 10:46:00 AM
Butterflies and fireflies, lemonade and starry skies. Yellow makes people happy. Love the write, Alfred:)
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 7/19/2017 10:54:00 AM
Hi Dan, glad you like my poem. Yellow is such a beautiful color.
Date: 7/19/2017 10:25:00 AM
what an uplifting poem Alfred I do love sunshine yellow:-) hugs Jan xx
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Alfred Berggren
Date: 7/19/2017 10:30:00 AM
Hi Jan, glad you liked my poem. It's so good to always hear from you. I hope your day will be filled with sunshine.

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