The Color of Love

she pulls the trigger
to end it for cheating on her--
dark night


CONTEST:"One in Five" sponsored by Andrea Dietrich.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 11, 2014 at 7:26 PM
wonderful win Olusegun ~ Love ~ SKAT
Liwayway Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 5:48 AM
Congrats on your win friend Ousequn. thanks for passing by ;) :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 3:10 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 6:30 PM
Aro, you did a haiku! so far it is the only haiku in the contest I'm very proud of you![to end his cheating heart] - you don't need the on her it's implied by the [she]Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Jones Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 4:40 PM
Very effective color! Congratulations
Lamoureux Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 10:43 AM
Dark and effective, congrats.
Mehta Avatar
January 12, 2014 at 12:55 AM
Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Olusegun
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:35 PM
I thought maybe my friend Susan had written this one. She writes this way sometimes in her tanka!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 11, 2014 at 9:34 PM
Congrats for your win. I liked the "darkness" of this!!
Mehta Avatar
December 27, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Nice entry on the color of love, Olusegun
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