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The Color of Love

she pulls the trigger to end it for cheating on her-- dark night CONTEST:"One in Five" sponsored by Andrea Dietrich.

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 7:26:00 PM

wonderful win Olusegun ~ Love ~ SKAT

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 1/21/2014 5:48:00 AM

Congrats on your win friend Ousequn. thanks for passing by ;) :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2014 3:10:00 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2014 6:30:00 PM

Aro, you did a haiku! so far it is the only haiku in the contest I'm very proud of you![to end his cheating heart] - you don't need the on her it's implied by the [she]Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 4:40:00 PM

Very effective color! Congratulations

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2014 10:43:00 AM

Dark and effective, congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 12:55:00 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Olusegun

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:35:00 PM

I thought maybe my friend Susan had written this one. She writes this way sometimes in her tanka!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:34:00 PM

Congrats for your win. I liked the "darkness" of this!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/27/2013 4:56:00 AM

Nice entry on the color of love, Olusegun