The Coldest Day

waking up with dismay
window glasses frozen
house turns into freezer
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 4:06 PM
As always, nice haiku with nice images, Noriko
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January 16, 2011 at 12:47 PM
Hi Nokko! Great haiku:) I really enjoyed reading this... Carol
Campi Avatar
January 16, 2011 at 4:57 AM
a very good description of the coldness around you. I would awake in such dismay if it was that cold around me, Jancarl
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January 16, 2011 at 4:42 AM
Good one very descriptive and expressive about this wintery blast..Enjoyed ..Sara
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