The Coat of Burden
Seasons given, time was served
Still standing, she observed
Breathing in shallow glimpses
Peering through different lenses
A new reflection in the mirror
Something missing, once familiar
The coat of burden is not there
Now her feelings all laid bare.
Thank you David.
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