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The Clue

I, me. my, mine
Is so selfish
It does not shine 

We, our, your, you
It is happiness
It is the clue

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/1/2013 3:09:00 PM
I don't know but I super love this.~SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2013 4:08:00 PM
cleverly crafted and loaded with wisdom. Brevity need not be witless.... great job..... Jake
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:38:00 PM
A profound poem. Beautifully wrapped. Thanks for sharing. ... Love,Mehnaz
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Date: 1/10/2013 11:01:00 AM
SHORT AND SWEET WELL SAID XXDAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 1/7/2013 9:32:00 PM
Hi Vesna What a great write this, and very appropriate. Thank you also for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo
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Date: 1/7/2013 12:23:00 PM
Enjoyed your wonderful write Vesna, thank you for your comment on mine, happy new year love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/7/2013 9:18:00 AM
Love it!
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Date: 1/7/2013 9:10:00 AM
So profound write in just 6 lines!Love this!Thanks for visiting my page.
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Date: 1/7/2013 6:36:00 AM
Vespa a great message you wrote in this rhyme. Nicely done. So often we think too much about I, Me, Mine instead of You, We. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 1/7/2013 3:07:00 AM
Great idea :D sharing is part of hapiness :D, I agree with that
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Date: 1/3/2013 6:04:00 AM
You nailed it in the right place. We need to get out of ourselves.
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Date: 1/1/2013 10:25:00 AM
Lovely thought, sweet Vesna!! and Happy New Year to you!
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Date: 1/1/2013 7:49:00 AM
Happy new year dear Vesna...will follow your clue ..very nicely done !!!! <3<3<3 luv SK
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Date: 1/1/2013 6:03:00 AM
Well, for some reason I, me, my, mine is human nature..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/1/2013 5:37:00 AM
Yes....true, Vesna. - Very nice poem, and well written. - 2013 is here! - May it be a good year!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/1/2013 3:47:00 AM
wonderful write Vesna,so very true,happy new year
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Date: 1/1/2013 3:28:00 AM
This is so true Vesna abd so nice and a Happy New Year to oyu love xx
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