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The Clue

I, me. my, mine
Is so selfish
It does not shine 

We, our, your, you
It is happiness
It is the clue

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Skat A

May 1, 2013 at 3:09 PM

I don't know but I super love this.~SKAT

John Posey

March 15, 2013 at 4:08 PM

cleverly crafted and loaded with wisdom. Brevity need not be witless.... great job..... Jake

Mehnaz Veetil

January 10, 2013 at 12:38 PM

A profound poem. Beautifully wrapped. Thanks for sharing. ... Love,Mehnaz

David Scott

January 10, 2013 at 11:01 AM

SHORT AND SWEET WELL SAID XXDAVIDSCOTT

Rollo West

January 7, 2013 at 9:32 PM

Hi Vesna What a great write this, and very appropriate. Thank you also for stopping by and reading my write. Rollo

Elizabeth O'Driscoll

January 7, 2013 at 12:23 PM

Enjoyed your wonderful write Vesna, thank you for your comment on mine, happy new year love Elizabeth

Susan Palli

January 7, 2013 at 9:18 AM

Love it!

Kash Poet

January 7, 2013 at 9:10 AM

So profound write in just 6 lines!Love this!Thanks for visiting my page.

Connie Gildersleeve

January 7, 2013 at 6:36 AM

Vespa a great message you wrote in this rhyme. Nicely done. So often we think too much about I, Me, Mine instead of You, We. Warm Smiles, Connie

Yanny Widjanarko

January 7, 2013 at 3:07 AM

Great idea :D sharing is part of hapiness :D, I agree with that

Elizabeth Wesley

January 3, 2013 at 6:04 AM

You nailed it in the right place. We need to get out of ourselves.

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2013 at 10:25 AM

Lovely thought, sweet Vesna!! and Happy New Year to you!

Sukmawati Komala

January 1, 2013 at 7:49 AM

Happy new year dear Vesna...will follow your clue ..very nicely done !!!! <3<3<3 luv SK

Sara Kendrick

January 1, 2013 at 6:03 AM

Well, for some reason I, me, my, mine is human nature..Enjoyed reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 1, 2013 at 5:37 AM

Yes....true, Vesna. - Very nice poem, and well written. - 2013 is here! - May it be a good year!! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Palmer

January 1, 2013 at 3:47 AM

wonderful write Vesna,so very true,happy new year

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 1, 2013 at 3:28 AM

This is so true Vesna abd so nice and a Happy New Year to oyu love xx

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