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The Classical Whisper

The tree is breezy you will come I know
The jasmine wind is waiting to greet you
The hands of the clock moving very slow
On the rose shaft sits the shining pink dew

The clouds have made the avenue so that
You can with the roses intact walk down
On the grass the glow worms at their love chat
Do get some light from them in the blue gown

The box I have left scented for the lips
The sparks I have all saved for the lightnings
That will set free the thousands of blue ships
Leading to the waves of stings and bitings

There you come it would be a scarlet coup
With the classical whisper  I love you
The rose buds loosening with the red hue
Reciting in the fragrance I love you
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April 4, 2018

Love Poem - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Heidi Sands 

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Date: 4/28/2018 8:45:00 AM
TRULY ENJOYED READING THESE WONDERFUL VERSES MY FRIEND. Closing stanza a true beauty... A fav....
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/28/2018 12:20:00 PM
Thank you ... Your satisfaction on reading is my reward ...
Date: 4/23/2018 8:06:00 PM
Hello Probir, Yes this is a love poem. I have read this poem four times. have a nice evening my friend.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/28/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene ... I am honoured ...
Date: 4/11/2018 11:46:00 PM
Lovely, Probir. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/12/2018 8:11:00 AM
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Date: 4/11/2018 6:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win on this excellent poem Probir....Maria
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/11/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, Maria ...
Date: 4/9/2018 2:20:00 PM
Very endearing poem, Probir. Listening to "Babbitt's Other Song" by Lonnie Smith while reading this sublime poem sent me on a wafting journey of love. That last line is as memorable as it gets. The rose buds loosening with the red hue. Reciting in the fragrance I love you. Beautiful poetry. Love and smiles always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4ax5DVgPTc
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/11/2018 10:23:00 AM
Thank you, Freddie ...
Date: 4/9/2018 1:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery and flowing verse.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/9/2018 7:53:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 4/8/2018 8:50:00 PM
Probir, I immediately recognized this poem as super special, and copied it to print, so I would be more apt to understand what iambic pentameter is. Then I see it's a winner, so I chose wisely! Hooray for you and for me! Your student.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/9/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much for the euphoria ... it will be easy for you to write in the iambic pentameter as it is an order of unstressed and stressed syllables and English is your mother tongue ... it is difficult for me as I am not much familiar with the accents of your daily speech ...
Date: 4/7/2018 2:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of love!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/7/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thank you, Susan ...
Date: 4/6/2018 10:39:00 AM
Beautiful first iambic Probir. More please.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/6/2018 9:21:00 PM
I feel reassured ... thank you so much ...
Date: 4/5/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Probir. Congratulations for your win :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 4/5/2018 8:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi for liking the poem and considering it for the placement ...
Date: 4/4/2018 11:27:00 AM
Well written love poem, Probir. Beautiful imagery :) luck in the contest ..hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 4/4/2018 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, Eve for liking the poem ... My first iambic ... It came out on its own ... I was going to call it just 'rhyme' ... then a friend intervened and remarked it was iambic pentameter ...