The Classical Whisper

The tree is breezy you will come I know
The jasmine wind is waiting to greet you
The hands of the clock moving very slow
On the rose shaft sits the shining pink dew

The clouds have made the avenue so that
You can with the roses intact walk down
On the grass the glow worms at their love chat
Do get some light from them in the blue gown

The box I have left scented for the lips
The sparks I have all saved for the lightnings
That will set free the thousands of blue ships
Leading to the waves of stings and bitings

There you come it would be a scarlet coup
With the classical whisper  I love you
The rose buds loosening with the red hue
Reciting in the fragrance I love you
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April 4, 2018

Love Poem - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Heidi Sands
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Lindley Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 8:45 AM
TRULY ENJOYED READING THESE WONDERFUL VERSES MY FRIEND. Closing stanza a true beauty... A fav....
Gupta Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 12:20 PM
Thank you ... Your satisfaction on reading is my reward ...
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 23, 2018 at 8:06 PM
Hello Probir, Yes this is a love poem. I have read this poem four times. have a nice evening my friend.
Gupta Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, Darlene ... I am honoured ...
Gauthier Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 11:46 PM
Lovely, Probir. Congrats on your well deserved win.
Gupta Avatar
April 12, 2018 at 8:11 AM
Thank you ...
Williams Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 6:57 AM
Congratulations on your win on this excellent poem Probir....Maria
Gupta Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Thank you, Maria ...
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April 9, 2018 at 2:20 PM
Very endearing poem, Probir. Listening to "Babbitt's Other Song" by Lonnie Smith while reading this sublime poem sent me on a wafting journey of love. That last line is as memorable as it gets. The rose buds loosening with the red hue. Reciting in the fragrance I love you. Beautiful poetry. Love and smiles always. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E4ax5DVgPTc
Gupta Avatar
April 11, 2018 at 10:23 AM
Thank you, Freddie ...
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery and flowing verse.
Gupta Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 7:53 AM
Thank you ...
Krutsinger Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 8:50 PM
Probir, I immediately recognized this poem as super special, and copied it to print, so I would be more apt to understand what iambic pentameter is. Then I see it's a winner, so I chose wisely! Hooray for you and for me! Your student.
Gupta Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 7:57 AM
Thank you so much for the euphoria ... it will be easy for you to write in the iambic pentameter as it is an order of unstressed and stressed syllables and English is your mother tongue ... it is difficult for me as I am not much familiar with the accents of your daily speech ...
Gentry Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 2:26 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem of love!
Gupta Avatar
April 7, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Thank you, Susan ...
Murray Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Beautiful first iambic Probir. More please.
Gupta Avatar
April 6, 2018 at 9:21 PM
I feel reassured ... thank you so much ...
Sands Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thank you for entering my contest Probir. Congratulations for your win :)
Gupta Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi for liking the poem and considering it for the placement ...
Roper Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 11:27 AM
Well written love poem, Probir. Beautiful imagery :) luck in the contest ..hugs Eve ~`*
Gupta Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Eve for liking the poem ... My first iambic ... It came out on its own ... I was going to call it just 'rhyme' ... then a friend intervened and remarked it was iambic pentameter ...
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