William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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The Clam

*Image of Shell The Beach Pearl by Pixabay.

the clam

cool clam chills
glacial claimed precious life
pearl rolls the seabed

2021 August 29
*HM*
Bite Size Poem no19
~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2021 September 04

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Beata Agustin September 7, 2021 at 4:51 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. William Kelii Kekaula September 7, 2021 at 8:03 AM My thanks, Beata, Peace and Joy, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman September 5, 2021 at 9:36 AM William, congratulations on your win. So creative to put a pearl in a clam instead of an oyster! The lowly clam becomes the source of a pearl gem. Love the alliteration! Blessings! Aloha! William Kelii Kekaula September 5, 2021 at 3:54 PM Thanks, Sam, as a taste for buttered seasoned oysters o'er savory clam soup, my alliteration be amiss, enjoy the day my friend, Aloha!

Gary Radice September 4, 2021 at 11:48 AM Your Haiku made me google how a pearl is formed William. Cheers for really making me think deep :) Gary William Kelii Kekaula September 4, 2021 at 12:08 PM I am pleased, Gary, with your ponderance and hoping your answers have been found. I welcome your acclamations with an open heart my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2021 at 10:01 AM I enjoy this pearl of a poem, William! Congrats to you. William Kelii Kekaula September 4, 2021 at 12:02 PM [Smiling] Cute, Andrea, now I've got a perfect wrinkle across mid-face, thanks my friend, Aloha!

Sara Kendrick September 3, 2021 at 1:08 PM Enjoyed reading this one today. reads like a great contender for the contest. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara William Kelii Kekaula September 3, 2021 at 3:30 PM Thanks for the booster shot, Sara, and I know that your fickle grandson found the best replacement of his former glory on the Tube. My best to you and your family, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues August 30, 2021 at 10:58 AM Aloha! I like how you wrote this! William Kelii Kekaula August 30, 2021 at 12:15 PM I like Darlene's comment, thanks, Kim, Aloha!

Darlene De Beaulieu August 29, 2021 at 4:04 PM Hello William Kekaula, while the clam relaxes on the beach the pearl rushes to the seabed. Nice.! Aloha! Darlene ] Darlene De Beaulieu August 30, 2021 at 5:42 AM Hello William Kekaula, I am so pleased to hear that I made you smile. Aloha!! William Kelii Kekaula August 29, 2021 at 4:09 PM Thanks, Darlene, you have placed a perfect wrinkle (smile) on my face my friend, Aloha!