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Shell The Beach Pearl - Free photo on Pixabay

*Image of Shell The Beach Pearl by Pixabay. the clam cool clam chills glacial claimed precious life pearl rolls the seabed 2021 August 29 *HM* Bite Size Poem no19 ~~Line Gauthier: Judged 2021 September 04

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Date: 9/7/2021 4:51:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/7/2021 8:03:00 AM
My thanks, Beata, Peace and Joy, Aloha!
Date: 9/5/2021 9:36:00 AM
William, congratulations on your win. So creative to put a pearl in a clam instead of an oyster! The lowly clam becomes the source of a pearl gem. Love the alliteration! Blessings! Aloha!
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/5/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thanks, Sam, as a taste for buttered seasoned oysters o'er savory clam soup, my alliteration be amiss, enjoy the day my friend, Aloha!
Date: 9/4/2021 11:48:00 AM
Your Haiku made me google how a pearl is formed William. Cheers for really making me think deep :) Gary
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/4/2021 12:08:00 PM
I am pleased, Gary, with your ponderance and hoping your answers have been found. I welcome your acclamations with an open heart my friend, Aloha!
Date: 9/4/2021 10:01:00 AM
I enjoy this pearl of a poem, William! Congrats to you.
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/4/2021 12:02:00 PM
[Smiling] Cute, Andrea, now I've got a perfect wrinkle across mid-face, thanks my friend, Aloha!
Date: 9/3/2021 1:08:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today. reads like a great contender for the contest. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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William Kekaula
Date: 9/3/2021 3:30:00 PM
Thanks for the booster shot, Sara, and I know that your fickle grandson found the best replacement of his former glory on the Tube. My best to you and your family, Aloha!
Date: 8/30/2021 10:58:00 AM
Aloha! I like how you wrote this!
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/30/2021 12:15:00 PM
I like Darlene's comment, thanks, Kim, Aloha!
Date: 8/29/2021 4:04:00 PM
Hello William Kekaula, while the clam relaxes on the beach the pearl rushes to the seabed. Nice.! Aloha! Darlene ]
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/30/2021 5:42:00 AM
Hello William Kekaula, I am so pleased to hear that I made you smile. Aloha!!
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William Kekaula
Date: 8/29/2021 4:09:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene, you have placed a perfect wrinkle (smile) on my face my friend, Aloha!