The Circle

Look inside me
judge my worth
weigh my heart
 Cast eyes upon my soul
see within this cycle
we exist the same
we have known and shared pain
 This journey we have have walked
seeing yesterday
hoping for tomorrow
 Being reborn by new truths
shinning so that others may know
this journey never truly ends
 The circle 
is to understand
so is this world
and yet we live in it
 Watching nature
share her secrets
seeing life come to completion
love but not in fullness
 It is something we see
but yet understand
only upon
do we wish to see without hate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 17, 2010 at 7:50 AM
A man is just a man. I love this write.
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July 15, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Donny this is a wonderful poem i see the center you placed yourself in here in the circle,, nice if you look at it from the edge... I really enjoyed your poem ,, And I so agree on your ending,,, when one is in love it does not extend into the waves of hate..Hate will only twist the center of your circle,,, well I truly enjoyed,, this will go to my favorite poems,,It is a genius poem,,have a good one,..p.d.
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