David William Breidenthal Poet Rhyme

The Chronicles of Seeing the Unseen -Part 2-

People seem not to care
They just stop and stare
Bullying everywhere...
No one sees, but Him - beware...
Be wary...
All around me is scary
They will never see
Nor will they feel
But, God knows how I feel
He has seen the tears I shed...
It's all in my head
It's all in my head
It's all in my head

Memories...flood...into...my...mind...voices so kind...
Let me unwind time for a time...
Shelter I couldn't find...loneliness is my only friend...
Let the clocks chime, for it's not a chime
To live, being left behind, watching the time unwind...
Meeting my end in beginnings...
Everyone is doing their share
Of endless, selfish winnings...
It's not fair...share some light of delight 
If you dare...

(this is an unfinished poem...will be finished by 3/19/16 - I got it all written down, so be patient please...:) Thank you, readers)

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Timothy Hicks March 21, 2016 at 1:04 AM I've edited in my notes on Bedtime - A Pantoum, the rules on how to write the form. You can also check Eve Roper's contest if you want a more thorough explanation. Cheers. David William Breidenthal March 23, 2016 at 2:48 PM Thank you! :) Have a super-dee-duper awesome day with joyous sunrays.

Timothy Hicks March 21, 2016 at 1:00 AM Even more contemplative this time around. I liked seeing this line yet again, "Let me unwind time for a time" ... it's almost a paradox, reminiscing while still moving forward in time. "Meeting my end in beginnings" A meaningful start (if all goes well) should lead to a meaningful end. I like how your poem makes me reflect ... keep it coming. David William Breidenthal March 23, 2016 at 2:47 PM So, it's like a conundrum or an oxymoron perhaps? Beats me that I'm a natural poet (X. I take your comments into deep consideration and I can tell you are a zealous poet with works of gold and silver. David William Breidenthal March 23, 2016 at 2:45 PM Thank you, Tim! Exactly. You said it alright. And, yes, I have this poem tucked away somewhere...haha but I haven't got to it, so I think this series is over... until I can find further inspiration for it. But, for now, I am going to squander my time at home and relax with my dog, Lexer :)