Larry Berdoo Poet Narrative

The Chosen Few

Surrounded by creative sharks at
play; keeping my moves at bay.
I hope I'm making myself clear,
or steering some away. Never
expect more, than you give. Greed
is pure void, never filled! Taught
many years before. Splitting hairs
with someone, it's all in good fun.
The chosen few, will surly agree.


03/10/14   written by, Larry Berdoo
                        WRITE ON!

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Gene Bourne March 16, 2014 at 1:12 AM I found the way you structured "The Chosen Few" fresh, original . I like the way you move your message to blend with the preceding line. Your free verse gives the implication of a stanza- metered form, yet moves freely, interconnecting lines. Very unique and enjoyable........................................................Your PS Friend........Gene Bourne