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The Chosen Few

Surrounded by creative sharks at play; keeping my moves at bay. I hope I'm making myself clear, or steering some away. Never expect more, than you give. Greed is pure void, never filled! Taught many years before. Splitting hairs with someone, it's all in good fun. The chosen few, will surly agree. 03/10/14 written by, Larry Berdoo WRITE ON!

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Date: 3/16/2014 1:12:00 AM
I found the way you structured "The Chosen Few" fresh, original . I like the way you move your message to blend with the preceding line. Your free verse gives the implication of a stanza- metered form, yet moves freely, interconnecting lines. Very unique and enjoyable........................................................Your PS Friend........Gene Bourne
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