The Child Who Draws Is the Most Lovable

——to Bianbian's Raised by Blood

The blood in her fingertips
Was ticking into a clear rivus
The golden fish were swimming in the universe
The man who could understand it can't understand 
The man who couldn't understand it can understand 

 On June 16th, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Jain Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 8:51 AM
Good one. But personally I don't like HIKU. Review Pari Style Poem to encourage me.
Wang Avatar
March 4, 2018 at 10:00 AM
Thanks for your encouragement.Keep communication.
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